NUR IZLYN

       

 

We have decided to decide to assess Dane's personal website (danegolf.wordpress.com). Below aresome of the critiques.

 

-          Should highlight on the more important and recent achievements and not everything since a decade ago

-          preferably put up prestigious competitions

-          Too wordy

-          Information overload

-          Didn’t state what he is applying for

-          Put 2 achievements

-          As a HR manager we would be turned off because it is too wordy

-          About me should be infront so that people know who they are reading about.

-          Give our personal information like address, handphone, skype and all. Very dangerous as it can be assessed by anybody